原标题：写文易，写情不易——谈南京期初投诉信的写法

我是孙老师，写你喜欢看、能模仿的作文，希望对你有些启发。

我多次写过文章说明，写好应用文真的不容易，尤其是：如何突出应用文的交际性。关于交际性特征，我认为凸显“emotion”特别重要。那么就要用到修辞手法。在我前面很多篇应用文中都用到了这个技巧。今天我这篇文章用到的修辞可以用在很多场合的。

下面请看南京期初考试应用文：

假定你是李华，你的邻居Smih先生的宠物狗不断的映叫，严重影响了你的生活。请给他写封信表达你的不满。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.犬吠对你的影响；

3.你的诉求。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不包含在词数内。

我的下水文：

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m your neighbour Li Hua.I’m writing to complain about your pet dog’s bark, a big headache to my family. （写作身份，写作目的：headache是修辞比喻，同时也是主题句，下面开始说哪些影响）

You can’t imaginehow painful I was to be woken up in the midnight, lying awake till dawn. You can’t imaginethe bark has subjected my old mother to insomnia. You can’t imaginehow it affected my son’s study, leaving him in low spirits the whole day. Therefore, I feel obliged to ask you to take my complaint seriously and take measures to stop the bark. （影响+诉求；三个you can’t imagine形成排比，同时加上感叹句，能唤起读者的同情和理解。）

Thank you for your consideration. Your earliest reply will be appreciated. (95 words)

好词好句：

a big headache一个令人头痛的问题

be woken up被叫醒

lie awake till dawn醒着并躺到天明

subject my old mother to insomnia使得我的老母亲患上失眠

leaving him in low spirits使得他精神萎靡

feel obliged to不得不

take my complaint seriously认真对待我的投诉

take measures to采取措施做

官方范文：

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, one of your neighbours. I’m writing to complain about your pet dogs.

I’m often bothered by your dog. Worse still, it keeps barking constantly at night, greatly disturbing the neighbours, me included. I’ve mentioned the matter to you several times, but somehow you ignored it. I do hope that you’ll take my complaints seriously and take proper measures to prevent it from happening again.

Thank you for your consideration. Looking forward to your earliest reply and action.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

巩固写作（原创）

假如你是李华，你最近在淘宝上买了一本英语词典，发现纸张印刷差，而且脱页，但是淘宝店主因为你给了差评不给退换。请给淘宝服务商写一封投诉信，内容包括：

1.写信目的 2.淘宝店主的服务对你的影响 3.你的诉求

责任编辑：