范文：
亮点:a great deal of entertainment have flowed into our life. 一大堆的娱乐设施涌入了我们的生活
it plays a significant role for children to develop a correct outlook on life.在树立正确的人生观上起到重要而作用。

In contemporary society, attributing to the advanced technology and the advent of moderlization, a great deal of entertainment have flowed into our life. Mainly due to the poor self-control and insuficient discipline from parents, some teenagers indulged themselves into games, or being influnced by the movie, to something that they think is cool on movies or televisions. That phenomenon may lead some impressional imdividuals to draw a conclusion that movies and television have much more harmfulness than benifits. Nevertheless, the negative effect seems inappreciable when compared with the prominent positive effects.

First and formost, it could be guided and solved by the guardians.

Sencondly, it plays a significant role for children to develop a correct outlook on life. By praising the heores who have courage and strength to defend their homeland or fight for liberaty, all of them would contribute to the teenagers to be a kind and strong-minded

Additionally, some documentary or science programs make children with easy touch to some interesting knowledge of this world/